Locomotive For Murder notes


Detective preshow

Cast introduction/Jan’s envelopes

Where is the train going? (football suggestion)

Looking for criminals

    o Interesting town – capital of Mercia

    o Interesting hobby - Coin collector

    o Interesting gift – Lordship

    o Interesting job – biomedical scientist

Introducing the suspects

    o Tammy Worth, mayor of Tamworth

    o Colin Collector, terrible gambler

    o Lord SirKnight, Lord of Sealand

    o Ed Iclescience, mad scientist

Checking their references

    o Spudman

    o Fifi the dog

    o The King of Belgium

    o The local orphanage owner

Who dies?


Act 2


Evidence

Ticket distribution

Setting up motives

    o A gift

          A coin

         S*****

    o A family connection

    o A family friendly game with an expansion pack

    o A secret

The suspects go to the bar and discuss their activity the previous evening


I have asked my brother to suggest 5 comedies to sneak quotes into the review from; this will make the writing of this post more improvisational. The only rules are they have to be comedies and they have to be scripted. This can be a play, a book, a movie, or a tv show. His selections:


  • Brooklyn 99
  • Big Bang Theory 
  • Miranda 
  • Johnny English
  • Life of Brian 

I won't highlight where these are in the post; you'll have to search for them.

He also said to make it more 'commissioned' (my word not his), I should also incorporate somehow:

The top job advertised on a random job website 

One front page item from a random news website

I used Indeed.com (Jobs in Lichfield) and BBC News. 

The results were 

Night Operations Co ordinator - Lichfield WS13 8NQ - Indeed.com

(I haven't chosen the news item yet but there will be several references to the World Cup)

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